Wednesday, February 3, 2010

Whereabouts Unknown

The measures of Megiddo have been met
The planned Apocalypse is here, and yet,
It takes a pinch of time, a teaspoon full of rhyme,
And all the sour lemon of regret, upon the table set
‘Til we forget
That yesterday (which never really was),
Tomorrow (how it hastens as it does),
And present (as it stands) are hiding in the sands
Of memory - and rumbling like applause - applying their own laws
How free of flaws!

Am I the only one to see it show?
Approaching so deliberately slow,
Creeping across the line of a filament so fine
Or frozen in a single flake of snow with nowhere else to go
But undertow

Draw me into those waters whence I came,
Where even Heaven hasn’t got a name
Unmercifully cool, a dark enchanted pool
And baptize me into the secret game, the clear and conscious flame
Uncertainly alone
My whereabouts unknown

- Romeo Tenderflake (poet and rancher, Botswana, 1919)

16 comments:

Transcend said...

Genius...

This one will have many reads... ;)

Artislav Mel said...

Thanks Transcend...

You are too kind, but please don't let that stop you.

LeMage said...

Wiz, Wiz, Wiz...

You magnificient bast...

No, I can't start with that.

So good to have you in the here and now...hope this finds you hale and hearty. Say "hi" to your Mom for me.

Keeping up with the upkeeping? Hope so.

And...the Mill? The Swede? Just asking.

Don't you know that you are a shooting star?

Don't you know....don't you know...

Well, Duh, of course you know

Best regards,

LeMage

Old 333 said...

The King under the Mountain is a snake; Last time Flood, this time Bake - unless the Council's choices few/are debated 'til the World's End's due/at which point the Mother's ice/will shroud us all and next time...

mice?

P

ps I like yor pome, Arty.

P

Old 333 said...

Especially the end bit.

P

Old 333 said...

I'm a sucker for frozen flame ineffable. Like lemon pie it is.

Old 333 said...

And planning. Here's to planning.

Old 333 said...

Rhyme thyme tigger show
whose Eye made it go?
is Go the real apostate term
or has Time tricks we cannot spurn?
Is Stop a possible in the flow
if there's never such a thing as Go?
Whose immortal Hand are we
and for whose Eye are we made free?

Old 333 said...

@Romeo: Mind the sword on your way down, down into deeper blue. It's a doozy.

P

Artislav Mel said...

Hi Peter,

You can tag yer poesy round here anytime...

truly choice it is.

I've been reading your opus lately...

... me like.

Pax bro.

Artislav Mel said...

Monsieur Le Mage,

Good to hear from you.

Lately I have been entrenched in a special project: an attempt at a comprehensive taxonomy of 'The Shining'.

It is probably the most stupid and nihilistic process I have undertaken, details become pointless... I am in a kind of fog.

Without a working PC for a while, I have neglected 'The Mill' but I am glad to be reminded. I will task myself to get at it. I need a serious change of pace.

I have just started working up an article on 'The Road', 'District 9', 'Titanic' 'Avatar' and 'Inglourious Basterds'.

Coming soon to Les Pantages de Perdue. C'est ici.

Peace, Master.

Mark.

Old 333 said...

Arty, where did you get my opus? I haven't found the f*cker yet myself, although I do intend to polish off Pest Control (the novel#1) and properly integrate its many disparate parts this year (if the pills work better than staying wasted - otherwise, well, heavy weather washes away all the prose and leaves the poetry pitifully sticking out of the flow, broken twigs and bloated fur-mats blasted by cold mud and brown waer and flies...wait, what the fuck is that*changes channel*screen goes black, burnt smell*


*flash*clear, then pixellates and turns neon colours a la the Calculus colorizing televisor in Herge's Castafiore Emeralds

Ah! Back in E-space ahggainnnn.
pomes here if you like them. Some early live readings too - no practice like the merciless witch-melting glare of the public practice.

Love and bubbles,
Peter

Old 333 said...

@Arty again: I like The Shining (book, not movie). Quite a lot.

And I guess I could stick all The Singles 2010 together into a book and call it an opus (or call each little gem or carbuncle an opus unto itself, accurate enough if petty), but so far that's not how the book process works for me. It seems to actually involve becoming manic and hallucinating occasionally for three months, culminating in hundreds of carefully (very, very carefully) formatted sheets laid out on the largest empty space available, followed by a process resembling a mutant cross between the Nabob coffee-bean-selecting ruler man and some crazy bum who's into automatic writing and raves about numbers. Available soon at bookstores...well, no, it probably will never leave the house. Strapped into its high chair with chains 'til it's twelve, if I have any sense.

That's the poetry. Prose just seems to take a fuckload of work. They both seem to be a kind of scrying, and are costly in terms of brain juices, but the poems form from pure words and must be captured, quickly, whereas the prose must be seen, dimly or sharply, and remembered quickly and rendered into words using the poetic process.

My head hurts now, but I'm going to be up for hours. Wheee!

Can't wait to see what the pills are like.

P

ps thx again for the pattings - you'll end up with me whining outside your window at dinner and giving big eyes, watch out

Artislav Mel said...

Peter,

By yer 'opus' I mean that I have visited Old 333 already (and will again).

Been following for about a week now.

You give poetry a good name.

Pax,

Arty

Old 333 said...

That really was a good poe. Enjoyed it again. The second time, in the morning, is alway the best.

Alex Robinson said...

That's a hanunting twinkle you kindled there, Mr Tinderfluke.
Melodic & time-sweeping.